This is meant to be haiku-like, but... not initially with that intention. The BIG TEXT came first because I was venting, and then I started filling in the 'undertext' in free verse, then they turned into standalone haiku like because that's how I normally roll, and somehow they ended up being linked, both to each other and the BIG TEXT.
Conflicting focuses/voices: do you get that feeling? Is it good or bad for the poem?
Font formatting: Not enough? Too much? Just right? Cliche/hackneyed?
I rewrote the first line of the last stanza. It just sounded so childish and lacked poetic quality and 'punch'